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Dead Eye (Other) by kthulah

jump a surface view deeper into you what i want to see impression of me what you thought to sate was inaccurate humor rumor while pick apart your guile what the people say cannot be will sway weaker minds who need not to know they bleed but those as we are know the span of star minds so big they touch sometimes even clutch deduction or more supersition lore nevermind the cult i get the result tumblers fall in mind tentacles entwined say now your goodbye under my dead eye

kthulah 24-Aug-02/2:02 AM
Density isn't the issue...At the time, it was written as a message...long story. For the general public, though, I probably should add a couple more stanzas at the beginning. My perspective of the world at large might be a little skewed because I've been around mostly people who are mystics in some way, all my life. When that's a social basis, rather than one being a sort of an island of awareness in a sea of oblivion, one tends to write as if it's common. I'll see what I can do for the revision.




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