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My Pain For You (Free verse) by Enchantres

Pain is not just pain It goes much deeper I want to reach it But I can't I try, I try so hard You want me to reach it, my pain So badly But then I see A light, so beautiful I want to forget Forget you forever Just like you forgot me I cry, I cry so hard My tears running My pain, it is gone, vanished A relief goes through my soul The pain became a memory

Enchantres 19-Aug-04/1:43 PM
Thank you for your honest critism, I certainly can do something with it in the future.




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