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Corner of 30th and Tibbs (Free verse) by klosterfobik

There couldn't be in these streets, of hoped for death and rain slicked dark, the possibility of the recent-new of guiltless lovers. And it seems in these windless alley ways of again and shadows, there could never be a child's smile. Hard to imagine the symmetry of sweet kind eyes looking into mine (big and brown), beneath the dim-yellow of street lamp's watch. Cannot believe the asphalt dusk and dreams, of these accusing cracked sidewalks, ever let sympathy pass. Was there ever unbroken or unfaded in these still gray streets of since forgotten? And will there ever be on these streets of hoped for death and rain slicked dark, the chance of a child's smile or the recent - new of guiltless lovers?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Aug-04/3:39 AM
Do you honestly think punctuation is for the artless? Is your brain actually thinking that right now? If so, then congratulations, because it is one of the stupidest thoughts ever. How is it possible to think something so bum-like without suddenly exploding in a giant shower of misplaced apostrophes? Punctuation, as any non-stupendously-idiotic person knows, is for clarifying meaning. The only people who think punctuation is for the artless, or that punctuation somehow imposes restrictions on their creativity, are people who are too thick to know how to use it. Instead of trying to defend your ignorance, you might consider doing something about it. Like, I don't know, learning how to punctuate?




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