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As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life (Free verse) by somemorepoetry

[Tomorrow is a swallow faster than death and coming forward to close in like a bracket] But pulled back and Straightened, a summer reed Driving downward and Deep into the mud Is the past Only stirred By the breeze Of memory And today is a gunshot direct and unavoidable, Leaving us to deal with the aftermath, and the ellipsis of what might have been...

MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!




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