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Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? (Prose Poem) by cat

The slightly older than middle aged man wears his sunglasses at the bus stop and squints towards the sun waiting for his number to come up. The ground vibrates, he looks up, squints to make sure he has the right number, you wouldn’t want to get on the wrong bus, and he steps on. Why doesn’t the bus have seat belts he wonders, as it rumbles and bumps over pot holes and dips on the boulevard. He puts his face to the plexiglas and looks for his stop, stop 47, the vibration of the bus always helps him darken reality and slide off to somewhere else, to a time where there was only two bus lines and the drivers were always the same, he tries to fight his instincts by counting the various stops, 40, 42, but he loses somewhere around stop 44. The slightly older than middle aged man wakes up at stop 58, his swollen eyes widen and he yells at the bus driver, “I told you I was stop 47.† Through the rear view mirror the slightly older than middle aged man sees the bus driver rolling her eyes at him and shrugging her shoulders. “People just don’t give a damn anymore,” he says just loud enough for her to hear. “Maybe you should get a car old man,” jokingly says a passenger across from him, a boy with brown eyes and a shaved head. He scowls and steps off the bus; he removes his sunglasses, and crosses the street, to catch the bus. Back to the stop that he missed.

cat 11-Aug-04/1:28 PM
dear "I have a degree from some school maybe, maybe not, but that's not really relevant anyway, because I have voted on 3077 poems, so that gives me the right to talk to you like you are an idiot"

Look overly sensitive freak that continues to respond to me, because he's a freakin idiot. If you think insulting people on the internet is fun, your life must not be going all that well for you, you know why? Because people who have nice jobs and healthy relationships don't respond to 3077 posts, do you know why, because they have a life, which you obviously do not, I mean you are bordering on freak, to brag about responding to 3077 poems.

The funny thing is I think that was the one thing you said which you were serious about, because it had a bit of a superiority, self-righteous air to the whole sentence.

“As of today I have read and voted on 3077 posts on this site, so I guess I'm adequately qualified to say what kind of repetitive self-obsessed muck is perpetrated every day here, while you're not.” ---everyone this person is a loser.

You know I may be self righteous, I might be dim, I may be gay, but yet you continue to come back in a pathetic attempt to one up my insults to you which means that you my really cool pseudonymed friend are simply one step above me, a lowly cat, which doesn't say much does it?

three licks and a coughed up ball of hair to you,

cat




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