poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on OLD AGE BLUES by massangel62.

Dovina10 Aug 2004

Let's hope there's more to old age than a kindly smile given to friends who's minds are as far gone as yours. Use it or lose it, like having the presence of mind to put your comment to somebody's comment right under their comment. By the way, your poem starts off well enough, I just think the ending could be a lot better.