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Marina (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Early morning fog filters through tall masts waiting brushing tight furled sheets

INTRANSIT 5-Aug-04/6:35 AM
wouldn't the masts be brushing the sheets, then? I see what you mean. are commas allowed in Haiku? Maybe the tall masts are brushing their teeth. dunno.




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