Shuushin1 Aug 2004

a prepositional phrase slugfest. Should you try to cut down on that one thing, your poems will be better for it.

I want to use my other standard line about showing not telling, but then I'd start to sound rude. Can't have that.

I like the idea, btw, of painting this generic but lovely picture, then exposing a specific memorable element - but the rest of this is distracting me.