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Dead (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

I look in the mirror And all I see Is a worthless person Staring back at me Nothing seems to matter Everything seems to hurt The only way to heal pain Is with pain So I step into the bathroom Find a razor and begin to cut As my blood spills onto the floor I feel almost free AS if my blood is what Has caused this pain With a single tear drop shed I realize how much I wish I was dead

QuirkyWonder 31-Jul-04/7:08 PM
Well I have never cut myself...I am usually happy with my life, not always though. I have thought about suicide, never tried to act on those thoughts though. What is it that you like about my poetry and what is it you do not like about it?




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