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Dead Eye (Other) by kthulah

jump a surface view deeper into you what i want to see impression of me what you thought to sate was inaccurate humor rumor while pick apart your guile what the people say cannot be will sway weaker minds who need not to know they bleed but those as we are know the span of star minds so big they touch sometimes even clutch deduction or more supersition lore nevermind the cult i get the result tumblers fall in mind tentacles entwined say now your goodbye under my dead eye

kthulah 23-Aug-02/4:56 AM
It's about superdeduction, which manifests itself in what some people would call telepathy.
The poem is about two people whose minds are superdeductive; one attempting to deceive the other, but the other, aware of the facades that are often put up to block.
The latter is the "narrator" of the poem...and is sometimes referred to by their peers as "dead eye" which is old western slang for someone with excellent shooting aim.




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