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Sacrament (Free verse) by Dovina

On the night she was betrayed She took bread and broke it And said, this is my body Broken by you. And after pouring wine She said, this is my blood Spilled for the remission Of your guilt. As often as she does this She does it In remembrance of him.

Dan garcia-Black 15-Jul-04/7:26 PM
Seems like you sucked one poet into taking the position you sought-- Open fly hook with a plastic jesus hanging from a fishing line of gold nylon. Reel 'im in, Dovina. Flop him onto the deck and hit him on the head with a bowling pin. Then multiply him with your loaves. Ah men!




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