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Somber Like My Pain (Free verse) by TwilightDawned

Somber like my pain, So hate filled. like the oh so tortured moon light, My dreams are terror- taken anew, Wishes undone,fantasys broken, Goals once set,now shards on the walk way, The glass was once full, and is now more than empty, A scene so horrible, it'll make your head Splinter, My crys are dormant.

TwilightDawned 10-Jul-04/11:56 AM
Oh oops, no I did not mean "Splinter" off the Turtles, It was an editing mistake I must of overlooked.
And when you say the Turtles, I automaticly think of the group "The Turtles" and thought you meant that they made a song by that. Heh.. Anyway..its Teenage mutant ninja turtles..turtles in a half shell, turtle power! (whooo..go old cartoons..)




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