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Whore (Free verse) by gavinduff

My friend told me about the day when he paid a whore but she ran away solemnity and dignity left with her as he stood on the doorstep of promise having embarked on a transaction that should, if all is good, garner some reward needing to fuck to find something some good luck but it’s not there and it wasn’t around the corner where she counted the notes it was at 8pm that same night when abstemiousness bragged of its supremacy run, little whore, run until nothing is an obstacle until clocks turn back and thieves offer gifts they once stole from their own impertinence keep running, little whore, until you find a place where junkies are cheerful and brothels are churches of the populace flog your gospel to my friends but let them read your bible or they may never believe that you’re running to a place where you’ll be at ease there’s no place where you’re fit to stand on those doorsteps that lead to emancipation’s front door run you little whore.

gavinduff 7-Jul-04/1:11 AM
Sentence structure? It's free verse.




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