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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 6-Jul-04/1:58 PM
Listen buddy, you and Dark Angel are the ones with the foul
language and name-calling. In fact, you started this whole
thing. And once more for your feeble mind, the central theme
in quantum mechanics is the basic inter-relationship and
inter-connectedness of ALL things. It is a complete change
in how physicists view the world and the old, Cartesian reality
has been replaced by a perceived oneness. So the reality of
Newton and other scientists of his time has been replaced
by the new physics of quantum. Our reality Has changed, you
dupe, but you are obviously unable to grasp such a basic
and obvious fact. And don't be surprised if our current
realities change once again as we gain more knowledge of
the universe we all share. And PLEASE read a good book on
quantum mechanics and spare me your obvious ignorance on
the subject.




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