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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 6-Jul-04/9:24 AM
You are really incredible. Dark Angel's "perfectly specific
assertion" that you refer to says nothing specific and sounds
like the words of a little kid without the knowledge to debate
beyond juvenile name calling.

As to your assertion that I have been, "soundly flogged by
specifics", in your dreams, turkey. You and Dark Angel are
both simpletons and should take turns congratulating each other
on your self-perceived, mutual profundity.

One hundred years ago, science universally believed in a
Cartesian, mechanistic reality which has now been replaced by
the dynamic reality of quantum mechanics. What we have is
a change in reality based upon a new way of viewing the world
we live in. And as time passes, this reality may be once again
proven to be bogus. So, reality or our perception of it does
indeed change. Is that so tough to comprehend, you lame brain.




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