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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

zodiac 6-Jul-04/8:36 AM
"You give no specifics" is the buncombe dodge of an inveterate guffer. Look back at the comments on this page. Now, have you at any point said anything more specific than "What is seen as reality varies but you are right in that reality is a constant" - which, incidentally, is not what ANY OF US have been talking about here, yourself included? Have you given any reason or proof for ANY OF YOUR ASSERTIONS AT ALL???!?! Yet, you've been soundly flogged by specifics all over your page, not the least of which is the perfectly specific assertion that -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. likes to "help people who are colossal boobs by telling them they're colossal boobs," - for which NO FURTHER JUSTIFICATION IS NEEDED.

PS-'Upon reading your comment, X, I could only shake my head in disbelief and utterly fail to respond to your points,' is the bullshit floundering of a desperate sinking guff.

PPS-You misspelled apropos.




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