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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 6-Jul-04/8:26 AM
Your convoluted logic is quite incredible. You call me a
"colossal boob" and claim you are doing so for my own good,
motivated by kindness. Yet, you give no specifics or reason
beyond a simplistic claim that you "like to help people who
are colossal boobs by telling them they're colossal boobs."
This ludicrous statement needs no opinion from me. It stands
without rebuttal as coming from a simpleton who should reflect
on the absolute stupidity of such discourse.

Regarding an "intuitive bad mouthing" compared to a "factual bad
mouthing", I can only shake my head in disbelief.

There is an apropo suggestion I have for you that was written by
Mark Twain:

"It is better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to
speak and remove all doubt"

So please get off my ass as I don't really enjoy these type
of vindictive and shallow arguments which do no one any good.




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