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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

zodiac 5-Jul-04/12:31 PM
Having only accomplished college-freshman physics and chemistry, and that ages ago, I have very little idea about gravitons, etc. I do, however, propose that if scientists build a machine to prove that gravitons exist, THEY WILL NOT BE CHANGING REALITY. They will simply be exposing some part of reality which has ALWAYS BEEN THERE. Suppose, to take it a step further, scientists in this decade 'prove' that gravitons exist and scientists in the next decade disprove them. How many times would you say reality has changed? You're wrong. IT HASN'T CHANGED AT ALL. Please, please, say you understand this now. Where you've buttocksed yourself beyond recognition is on the semantics of it. The word reality ONLY MEANS things which are real, which have existence. We know this because we made it up to mean that, just as if I invented a word - say 'Verschnugle' - to mean 'things which are red'. To say some parts of reality are real and some parts aren't, or that 'reality' changes depending on who's looking at it, is at best merely uninformed to the max, and at worst the most hideous sort of stoned undergraduate late-night guff-talking, something along the lines of, 'Hey, maybe what I think is brown is, like, some other color for you, maaaannnnn. Like orange... Yeaaahhh, dewd! I'm blowing my own miiinnnd!!!'




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