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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 4-Jul-04/8:31 AM
Zodiac....My, my, we are getting testy. Not unusual plus the
personal name calling by someone whose arguments are mostly
bogus and self-rightious.

I bet you would like me to "walk off a cliff." Then you could
peddle your comments and opinions with no one to dispute them.

I will try once again to explain reality but I doubt you are
capable of understanding anything beyond your own personal bias.
We can no longer view the world or universe as being separate
from ourselves. Humans are part of an intrinsically dynamic
universe that is in constant flow and change and reality must
be, according to quantum mechanics, one which recognises the
basic unity or oneness of all things. The reality is that
nothing exists in isolation and our perception of a world
"out there" is bogus. Still, a perceived reality is still
valid in the mind of the observer who is still bogged down
in a "Newtonian", classic concept of the world. In modern
physics, mass is no longer associated with a material
substance and particles are actually bundles of energy. So
from a quantum view, I can dismiss your arguments regarding
reality and take comfort in knowing that you actually believe
reality exists in your dualistic mind-set. So chill out, turkey.
Things are not as they seem and your arguments concerning
reality are merely illusionary nonsense.

And regarding the Ebert analogy, I only said I liked him as a
movie critic. You are the one who turned this into an analogy,
though a very weak one. Have a nice day, dipshit.




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