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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 2-Jul-04/10:22 PM
I grow weary of your bullshit and will waste my time on your
comments only briefly. You say reality or what is real is, by
definition, anything which is in the universe. Wrong!!! Reality
from a human perspective is that which we personally perceive
to be real and we all pick and choose differently. Reality to
one individual may be fantasy to another and we all tend to
view the world based, not upon reality but rather, on what we
expect to see, what we have seen before. It is a concept/percept
continuum which negates reality and promotes complacency as you
so aptly demonstrate in your writing. You can't see the forest
for the trees dimwit and it is you who is "ass-talking", not me.
The only difference between fantasy and reality lies in your
pre-conceptions which are based, not on reality but upon that
which you choose to acknowledge in a feeble attempt to bolster
your personal bias, your world-view which has no validity
beyond the limitations of your perceptions. You say that I have
no knowledge of superstrings and I say neither do you or the
physicists who postulate them. That being the case, what is
wrong with a bit of fantasy? After all, self-imposed realities
tend to be just that, beliefs and concepts unique to each of
us and mere conjecture based upon a very limited amount of
information which we pick and choose to suit our particular
preferences. I could go on but it is late and time for some
refreshing oblivion. Peace!




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