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Recycled Stardust (Free verse) by Quarton

Time flows unimpeded through the vastness of space, precursor of awareness and meaning in an ever expanding continuum; like flower petals unfolding, probing in search of the light that sustains all life: rose and thorn--saint or sinner. Tiny craters formed by raindrops dance across the water's surface, rippling outward from the center, a microcosm of the universe expanding in creation's renewal. Seeded by exploding stars creating recycled stardust, scattered like wind blown pollen on currents of random destination. Over time, stardust merges in increasing order and complexity, from darkness to light-- oblivion to self-realization, creation's emergence played out on earth's temporal stage; the universe embodied and aware. Superstrings a cosmic symphony vibrating in infinite repertoire, emerging pointless particles in a nine dimensional space, like tiny loops of string curled up in a ball. Bizarre concepts beyond reason, when reality becomes fantasy and perhaps returns back to reality once again, unsure of what is real and what is illusion. A child grows old and dies, stars are born and transform into supernovae or dwarfs, as from order to chaos the second law pervades. Time passes in accord with entropy, robbing the universe of self, cosmic anarchy the result-- a closed system inevitable. In the blackness of space, shining and vibrant, the earth in shades of green and blue. Verdant and teeming with life, a reversal of entrophy as order and complexity increase, open-ended and unimpeded in the long journey from oblivion to the recognition of shared essence-- stardust magically transformed into you and into me.

Quarton 2-Jul-04/11:31 AM
zodiac...Yes, I would like to hear more but first, some
omments on yours.

In a time/space continuum, time does flow freely at its
outer limits as there exists nothing to impede its flow.
Time is being created, not in a conventional sense but
in accordance with quantum theory and a four dimensional
time/space. Light is indeed impeded by gravity and other
things such as mass but that is not what is happening as
time becomes extant.

What is so silly about comparing the small craters created
by a raindrop (yes, they do cause craters to form but on the waters surface, not on a flower.) or the
unfolding of a flower petal? Like the universe, they expand
from within and are indeed a sort of miniature likeness in
their expansion.

"exploding stars creating reycled stardust" is what, "silly
to the max?" In fact, we and every element in the universe
were created either in the bowels of a star or by the explosion
of a supernova. And these stars are currently second generation
which makes them recycled. This "stardust" is a shared common
bond and links us all in a physical as well as a mystical way.

"random destination" is not an "enormous contradiction",(better
called an oxymoron). Random is defined as "chance" or "not
determined" So if I said "undetermined destination", would that
still be a source of irritation to you?





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