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Center Of The Universe (Free verse) by Dovina

When I think how each small life Feels itself the center of the universe, How sunshine, rain, or food is good or bad, Depending on need, How conditions carry different meanings, For each thing that lives, I fill with wonder and despair At how the world ends A thousand times a minute. If I crush an insect, The sun is blotted out, The stars fall, The earth is shattered, For ever and ever. The universe ceases to be For that living thing. But of course it was only an insect.

zodiac 2-Jul-04/10:00 AM
No. I couldn't. At any rate, you've got this whole conversation horribly wrong - to say nothing of your ideas about the universe, insect life, or what good poetry is 'about'. I never said this poem was about believing all animals are equally deserving of life; I just assumed you'd think something like that - and you do.

What's more, saying a poem, story, or nearly anything else is 'about' one thing or other is silly to the max. The only context I could imagine in which two people might reasonably be talking about what something is 'about' is some casual conversation, most likely simply for the purposes of identification, i.e.:

Chad: Have you read "Center of the Universe" by Dovina?
Brad: I don't remember. What's it about?
Chad: It's about a person stepping on a bug.
Brad: Oh, right. No.

In short, I'm afraid I'm going to have to cut you off here. No hard feelings.

-zodiac

PS-What's with saying "I knew a poet who..." all the time? Is that a... JIBE???!?




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