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finally i say goodbye (Free verse) by francis nor capule

finally i say goodbye not without reason but with acceptance the acceptance that came from realizing realizing that you never will be free once i thought you were and everything i did everything, though somehow fell short now i never have to feel unlucky i never have to question my being and just accept the fact that we never were meant to be the fact that i have been in love that i have the capacity to care for someone to do anything and everything for someone other than me that i have to thank you for that i have to dwell on that someone i have to find so finally i say goodbye

Dovina 30-Jun-04/1:04 PM
Though this appears to be heartfelt and a thought worthy of poetry, the presentation falls short of one of the best definitions of love I've read and a touching ode to a fallen sister, both by the same poet. It's not just you; a spirit of depression seems gripping poemranker like a disease in a beehive. I feel like a prodical daughter returning to find the houses boarded up and the homefolk moping around.




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