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Sustained (Free verse) by Dovina

With capacity to recognize Shortcomings in himself, The shortfall between his life And his art, He drives toward abasement With inflexible morality, Like a river to the sea, Carrying garbage in its wash. Black eddies shock his soul, Tragedies pinch a narrow life, Something soured, embittered, Like late September smog. He groans and shudders and pushes on. The more he submits to the drag Of moral gravitation, Striving to achieve distance, while cleaving to his friends, The more a reactive thrust rises, Sustaining as he seeks to descend. He drives earthward, pulled skyward, A marvel of levitation. Reactive waves, Rebounding, falling, Rebounding.

god'swife 28-Jun-04/1:02 PM
Last year my son was placed on the district allstar soccer team. His coach was such a tough son-of-a-bitch most of the parents and kids complained, some even dropped from the team. This coach hurt my son's feelings, he even made my son cry, but he taught my son more, about playing soccer and being responsible and always doing the absolute best you can and not settling for less, than any other person on the face of this earth. My son loves him now, and is more responsible, more thoughtful, and better at everything he does. When ai staarted on this site it was cut-throat. there was not only the usual insults but also a group of honest poets who would rip you a new asshole in a second if you posted crap. I love and miss those people. I need to grow, I take my writing very seriously. I take all poetry very seriously. If you post crap I'll say so. I'm not a hostile person, I would define myself on this site as fed-up and unrelenting. I love praising people and I do when it's appropriate. I wish that comment on your Hills poem hadn't been lost, you probalby would have a better picture of me now, who knows.




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