boldsilence25 Jun 2004

I like this. It's harsh and blunt, but I like that it's straight-forward. The rhymes don't really distract the reader eithre, especially at the end. At the beginning, they were kind of shoddy, but it's okay, because the poem was good. I really enjoyed this. I hope to see another one like it...

-Nichole-

P.S. - I'd appreciate it if you'd take a look at one of my poems too.