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Navy Pier (Free verse) by Doug

Lake Michigan's soft and ceaseless cobalt breakers, the dulcet breeze by the Beer Garden in such peculiar concert with your silly laugh. It blew your russet hair against my cheek, as I drank the rest of your warm Black & Tan and stared at the shimmering of your freckled shoulder, half-concerned that sweat and sun could make such splendor.

pain killer 22-Jun-04/11:05 AM
oi fred mczodiac@wibble.com, i suppose i should fold like a fragile flower under the full force of your mordant wit, either that or sulk a lot, but heaven knows we've already got one morrissey thank you very much, and the last time a checked one neil hannon too, although you do a make for a most divine comedy yourself...now where did i leave my whip..oh yes i left it in my valaise...just ask adam and admit you haven't the faintest idea what i'm on about have you?....ahh modern culture mr honk,modern culture.....or at least circa 1977




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