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"She Phoned This Morning" (Free verse) by ARTIE

As I woke on berth of linen in gray, jubilant charmed voice did herald my way. A vision remembered of soft curves displayed from which spoke the voice of an Angel, now not far away. Oh, how my soul doth yearn, for this sight and sound on each new day.

MacFrantic 21-Jun-04/1:19 AM
Sounds too much like only the decent beginning of a more substantial poem. I appreciate the use of language. *7*




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