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nanana (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

Shifting creases barricade a sweet, cohesive form And unannounced, allies renounce in grunts and shouts "We've found our war." And train their sons and daughters properly. Point A must always meet point B unless a line divides a means. Gods and kings alike have seen geometric anomalies. But blindness became optional. So soft stays soft, but hard hangs aloft in a rarely realized realm. This is where shapes coagulate and forge a frame to surround the obvious. A safe place where faces fade with the static collection of dust. "But I said, but i said what were the parameters? You left them undefined. And hence the confusion." "oh. So sorry to keep you hanging. You had something to say, so spit it out." "Um, when I first slipped in I felt my resolve weakening. So, what's the slippery coating?" You try you cha-rye you triangulate coordinates into an arbitrary archetype. And that's why you slide so easily.

zodiac 19-Jun-04/8:15 AM
Do you know what 'discriminative' really means?

Besides, math is the most narrow-minded thing ever. You can't just go around prattling math-sounding nonsense like 'Point A must always meet point B unless a line divides a means' like you would with poetry-sounding nonsense. Point A almost never 'meets' point B. A line 'dividing the means,' whatever that means, has nothing to do with whether the two points 'meet'. That's not being narrow-minded any more than insisting 2 + 2 = 4 (instead of, say, 'purple') is narrow-minded. Please, get a life and stop writing about math. Thanks.





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