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The Gray Idea (Free verse) by Doug
Crawling-
forever slowly
toward the womb,
thickets of torper block our path,
so we drudge through the thorns-
to perception.
Struggling-
blindly-
with Fate and Time,
often strangled by hands of chance(and clocks)
all the while kicking
against together.
Breathing-
faint thin air
of substance,
a stillness reveals the feeble wheezing of removal,
and between our breath and the Hope of real-
lies the gray idea
of a phantom.
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