richa9 Jun 2004

It is not enough to call the wind arrogant, its actions should portray such, then there would be no need for the word.

Same goes for 'fragrant' (what smell is fragrant), 'desperate' 'hopeless' and 'exuding wry misery'.

I am growing fond of the polite 'english' voice in poetry. Fallen portico/ ironed silk give the poem a charm certainly.