poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on cold sonnet by <~>.

<~>21 Aug 2002

i think my problem is that i spend a lot of time in my head. my thoughts wrap themselves in polysyllabic mantles; i think with those words. you're not the first to mention that my words are too complex to flow. i tried to work on that, to simplify the description in a rewrite of secret, admirer. did you see the first version?