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Spitballing (Limerick) by INTRANSIT

I once knew a child who spit, 'twas publicly said: "He's unfit!" One day he was gone... they, in horror, looked on he was seasoned with thyme on a spit.

ggawrysi 31-May-04/7:19 PM
"they, in horror, looked on" breaks the flow of a limerick, and i agree that the last line is weak. take out the commas from the horror line and that part is fixed... the rest is up to you




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