poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Soldiers (Terzanelle) by Angeline.

Shuushin31 May 2004

A fairly rarely used form in these parts (maybe I posted one - I'll check after I write this); its a tough one.

It very easily passes the "dress wearing the girl/the girl wearing the dress" test and the rhymes are smoove.

did you miss the punctuation after bone on purpose? You might have.

I wonder if wordsmithing "very hot" would buy you anything (other than trading freshness for pretentiousness), you've been up and down that I suppose.