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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 30-May-04/5:23 AM
tell me zodiac, i am struggling to understand something.... why did i get the following in my email but didnt see it when i came here?

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User zodiac replied to your Poemranker comment on "Suicide of the Ego" in which
you said:

> p.s- you spelt dysfunction wrong

Their reply was:

No, you did. Look again.

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maybe because you think you got it right... but then you did look and saw you weren't right?.... repeat this pattern in every area of your life, if you dare to see how much of it you have fucked up with your self righteous attitude. and then you will start getting it. see what i mean, you dont have the balls or the brains to be able to understand the poem. and that sounds self righteous... but the difference here is, i am right... i am trying to show you something...and you are so fare up your own ass that you wont allow yourself to admit that someone has got things sussed out just a little bit better than you have... you could be so much more than what you allow yourself to be. and if you have read the reply to the gay marriage haiku, and were capable of being honest with yourself, you would see that.
the reason i have been rattling you emotions? to wake a sleeping monkey up, you have to rattle it's cage a bit.





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