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I love you (Free verse) by AskittlesK

My days are passing before me I'm feeling pain throught my veins. I'm feeling remorse and out of control. I'm not hanging onto my life anymore. I'm losing my grasp on reality, Until at one point I feel even worse, Just when I'm about to give up all hope, Something happens to me that seems to work. I've got a new friend,who has felt like this before. Who seems to read my mind, every time when I usually close the door. I never thought anyone could read my mind like he can. I thought I was going insane until I met you. I don't know what I'd do without you, I couldn't imagine going on without you here. I'd be angry, lost, alone, sad and decaying... Life would be bringing me down again, I wouldn't want to live anymore. It wouldn't be worth living if you weren't there, I love you

AskittlesK 28-May-04/8:07 PM
ook for me this tells a story.. i wrote it for a person.. from me... so its not "angst" to me..
I don't really know what you are getting at.. Saying that you have just watched a movie that made you cry, and it was very touching.. then its not important? you said It shouldn't be something important.. All of my poems feel big to me... they are important.. and I'm not trying to make it seem like "silly angst"...




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