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Granting Asylum (Prose Poem) by seanlb1
walking into the sanctuary, the girl fell. the cracked, vine-covered
stone floor of the ruins held no comfort in waiting for the small hands.
as though life had just ended, she rolled over and layed looking at the
sky not more than a gray mist. her hands did not feel pain. she did not
feel misery or sadness or any of the common emotions that are brought by
the realization of a fall. she was alone. there was no one around. no
one for miles. no one had been in this naturally preserved building for
close to an eternity. there were no windows; holes surrounded and nearly
covered by vines made up for the lacking light. there were no doors;
only an arched entryway. no seats; the stones from the long-ago
collapsed roof held comfort for those that appreciate a seat of stone.
she did not. the floor was where she found refuge. she was in her teens.
age didn't matter. she was wearing a deep red shirt and dark, torn jeans.
her shoes were nonexistant. her feet told a story of how it had rained
the day before making the ground soft and full of mud. a tear slid down
her cheek and hit the porous stone where it was absorbed after traveling
one of thousands of cracks made by years of weathering. or were the
cracks caused by the tears of those forgotten? the clouds overhead
darkened with intensity. the stone around the girl's delicate head began
drowning in a mix of tears and rain. she did not stir with the coming of
the rain. the area around her eyes became streaked with black makeup
that she used everyday to hide herself from those who meant the most to
her. a near silent whimper expressed her lament for everything as the
last reflection of light in her eyes faded away. a new vine climbed the
wall of the sanctuary...
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