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Shelter (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Twisted trees dance windy rhythms, dead lake below begs for run off, hills to the west capture a storm front. If i stay here longer i will become part mountain, my skin blended from the hunter, movement silenced by the desperate howl of pines battling to know air. Soon snow will again fall.

Jarah 20-Aug-02/11:11 PM
i agree.. it creates a good picture of what its about but the words just dont fit together right or something.. other than that its kewl.. oh and ( maybe u should do some research about people b4 u go chasin them around and accusing them of shiznit..)




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