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Swan on Willow Lake (Haiku) by Caducus

Sailing upon gold Through reeds which bow before you Jealous blackbirds caw

richa 17-May-04/11:22 AM
I think this is how a haiku should be written. The first image and then a different image (the blackbirds) linked to the first.

Would leave out jealous though. Haikus are about imagery more than most other forms. Image without need for explanation.




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