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me. (Free verse) by opiate

A dead tree in the heart of a vast barren desert, inside the hollow trunk a spider spins layers upon layers of web -each intertwined with the other. Thousands of insects caught between the webs. Some whole, some half-eaten. there in the heart of the desert, there in the hollow tree trunk, there caught in spider webs, there amidst the insects, there i'm stuck, there, you'll find me. Do you have what it takes? To reach out and help me.

Bobjim 17-May-04/5:04 AM
I think you'll find the question is: Do you have what it takes to be worth helping?




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