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she. (Free verse) by opiate

Out of the clay of nothingness and dirt, An artist sculpted my love story, Her statuesque is intertwined with mine; With Stars shining in her hair, my fairy tinuviel, Searching and wandering for her, time immemorial, Her love is like an age old wine; She walk the street at night, into the blue light, On Pegasys, wings fluttered, moon-chasing, starry ride, Lips kiss, comets will collide, skies will shine; Holding her hand, walking, kissing, loving, talking, Free as birds, weightless as astronauts, moon-walking, Dancing and tracing, romancing, eyes in line; Laying in arms, thrown back, legs intertwined, Elves singing, angels serving, in heavens we dine, A tear to a thought, her gentle touch, she is all mine.

Sasha 15-May-04/6:37 PM
TOLKEIN IS DEAD. Unless you are Tolkein frozen cryogenically within minutes of death and then subsequently revived, which you are plainly not, please refrain from appropriating images, motifs and names (tinuviel) from The Lord of The Rings. Otherwise go to one of the multitudinous fanfic sites where you can write about gimli assraping an elf.

Thank you




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