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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10

sitting here tonight alone in bed a million things running through my head what i did or didnt say things i should have done that day oh how id pay to rewind time even for my last dime i wish for just one more moment, just us i get so angry i start to cry and so sad i start to cuse i believe in the fight that you fight i know you are only doing what is right i am honored to be your wife but sometimes the heartache custs like a knife i know you will come home from this war dont worry babe, ill be fighting the guards at the door!

Sasha 14-May-04/3:32 PM
Now now it wasn't nice of you to delete my comment like that. I mean, I'd just re-post it, but I can't because I don't remember: partly beccause your poem had a mental black-out effect similar to the pressure of a steel baseball bat when applied to the skull of a living person. O well.




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