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Swan on Willow Lake (Haiku) by Caducus

Sailing upon gold Through reeds which bow before you Jealous blackbirds caw

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-04/1:17 AM
Stark and haunting words. The image of sailing "upon gold" is truly, sublimely inspired... this will perhaps remain with me for the rest of my life. Wonderful.

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