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Mislead (Free verse) by PK

Wretched bitch....Mislead fling Lost behind Mardi Gras's theme. Masked as the Debonair, Lost in vein... Pleasurable moans, Exotic screams... Ecstasy unleashed, Extreme climax... A pure heart screams, vaguely obvious. Falls then deep...into a first-time scene. Alcohol and booze - soak her thoughts.... Under the influence -- Of the masked Debonair.

cuddlytiger17 10-May-04/1:25 PM
You have so much emotion into this, it really grabs the readers attention. I like it a lot!!!




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