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Dirty Pops (Haiku) by Tarquin De La Bog

Up To My Nose. Pops Yellow Spot Before Me. Pops Heaven. Dirty Pops.

Tascobar 20-Aug-02/4:35 AM
A rather delectable haiku on what I presume to be a fairly tacky drug experience. I particularly like your use of repetition to hammer home your point with authority. 9/10.




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