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American Haiku 2
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memorybabe
her hands tense grip the wheel moving on to Desmoines
<{Baba^Yaga}>
20-Aug-02/12:09 AM
Look up haiku..please for the love of writing..this is barely even freeform..this is barely even bare....god let it fucking end...please. here i'll show you a real haiku.............ready...good....../mem
orybabe writes/what she hopes might be haikus/It's a shame they're not/..................see not hard at all, see, it goes 5/7/5. count or be eaten alive..better luck next time deary..
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