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American Haiku 2 (Haiku) by memorybabe

her hands tense grip the wheel moving on to Desmoines

poetandknowit 19-Aug-02/11:08 PM
I am by no mean an expert of this form, but I alway thought the syllables were different, or is that the point with the American Haiku. Moreover, why disgrace the putrid cow town of Des Moines with the misspell? Explain the motives because the piece does not.




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