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Black Belt (Free verse) by etherealmaiden

Homework to do Grades to get I must be perfect Tighten the Belt Roommate troubles Feeling left out I must try harder Tighten the Belt Room is a mess Parents are mad I must clean up Tighten the Belt Friends are gone Relationships lost I must find a way Tighten the Belt Couples all around Love in the air I must get a man Tighten the Belt Eating less food Reflection looks worse I must lose weight Tighten the Belt Everything's wrong Never good enough I must get it right Failing to breathe Spiraling thoughts I am in heaven One more notch

etherealmaiden 3-May-04/8:46 AM
not exactly for me, but it's whatever you make of it... so sure. For me it is about strangulation and pulling tighter as you think about all of the things that you can't do right and all the pressure. They are both forms of self-mutualtion and it works for both. *shrugs* it's up for interpretation




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