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killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) (Villanelle) by nentwined there wasn't much to do that day
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my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
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there wasn't much to do that day
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my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
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there wasn't much to do that day
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my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away
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there wasn't much to do that day
my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.
Up the ladder:
standing outside the door
Down the ladder:
If I Had
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.9
Posted: December 17, 2002 6:51 AM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2002 6:51 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.898269 Overall Rank: 244 Comments:
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
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17-Dec-02/8:19 AM
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damn. damn, damn damn. have a 10, for being so damn zen.
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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17-Dec-02/8:26 AM
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:rofl: thank you. it's funny, I just made the couplet, then filled in the dots to see where lines were supposed to be, to try and understand the poem form, and... well... :)
Rings along nicely with your other poem...like a chorus line o.O
Great...now this is stuck in my head XP
hard to get the "..."'s out of your head? :)
esoteric? hardly. 8.
Wrapping paper also works for giant colorul origamy.
lmao!!!!!!!!!
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