regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-03/1:25 AM
You were my first random selection. I never have had any luck. Have you tried short stories?
Re: Eyes by Jake	25-May-03/1:46 AM
I like this Jake. I think you could improve upon the poem with a few less commas. Do you read them aloud to see if it flows well? And it should be 'hoping.' The poem has a lot of depth and I think just needs a little tweeking. Peace,
Re: MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck	30-Jun-03/1:48 PM
How can you call this poetry? Other is right. There is no category for this garbage. I mean really, you don't say anything and it is offending.
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	3-Jul-03/12:24 AM
Well, you can write. Not a bad poem at all. Except my stigma was the 'archaic' version where you are talking about the stamen, I believe. Peace, McR
Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II	3-Jul-03/12:47 AM
"We're a bunch of talentless no-hopers. That's right. Every single one of us." Speak for yourself. You had an awful mouth! Get kicked off? Shardik, horus8, <{Baba^Yaga}> and Bachus Ding dong the which is dead...
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jul-03/2:14 PM
lol. Who is Nentwined? Why do hate "fags?" Why do you hate at all? Do you get girls with your beautiful poetry? Freddy Mercury was beautiful, inside and out. He had the voice of an angel. He will be remember long after you are gone. Show me you can write something. Like a love poem, without it being lewd. Can you do it? Can you take the challenge? I give you a big fat zero because this isn't worth reading.