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12-Feb-07/7:17 AM |
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Wow! This is a fav...I love it when my mind goes on a brief vacation, when my eyes are closed :) Bethy
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| Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani |
12-Feb-07/9:58 AM |
A true story? WOW! I think we all have gone to school with an "Andy" Sad but a good poem/story.
:) Bethy
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| Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver |
3-Mar-07/3:28 AM |
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Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
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| Re: In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void |
3-Mar-07/3:36 AM |
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Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
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| Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton |
3-Mar-07/3:44 AM |
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I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
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| Re: The Beginning by jessicazee |
3-Mar-07/3:52 AM |
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I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
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| Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi |
3-Mar-07/4:06 AM |
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very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
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3-Mar-07/4:10 AM |
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poo poo head...I hate it that your talent is so natural and raw!!! Have a sunny day :) Bethy
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| Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius |
3-Mar-07/4:13 AM |
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I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
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| Re: Thought by Quarton |
3-Mar-07/4:17 AM |
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This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy
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| Re: Shoe Thief by Blue Magpie |
3-Mar-07/4:28 AM |
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A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy
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| Re: looking for by Phalkon |
3-Mar-07/4:39 AM |
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Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
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| Re: A Rendezvous by lrustagi |
9-Mar-07/1:18 PM |
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I like this !! Don't change a word... :) Bethy
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| Re: Within by drnick |
13-Mar-07/9:43 AM |
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| Re: Pedaling West by Dovina |
13-Mar-07/9:50 AM |
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May God grant you with "Buns of Steel" my dear friend...good poem :) Bethy
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| Re: Just today by MacFrantic |
13-Mar-07/9:56 AM |
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I like this...judgement comes to those who know how the story ends...:) Bethy
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13-Mar-07/10:02 AM |
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Interesting...I like the link between music and making the 10th shot, all by chance and Larry is watching...lol... he just won't turn the music back on til you move on...go ahead...make the basket...the ball is in your court... good poem :) Bethy
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| Re: STAN by poetry_rancour |
13-Mar-07/10:04 AM |
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talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
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| Re: A Question by poetry_rancour |
13-Mar-07/10:05 AM |
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hehehe lol...and it should be...:) Bethy
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13-Mar-07/10:06 AM |
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radio ga ga...old song from many moons ago...still its good :) Bethy
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